Share your story in one clear statement

Craft a winning one-liner for your business or personal brand

 

"So, what do you do?"

It's the unavoidable question, and most people struggle to answer it. Our brain kicks into overdrive as we begin fumbling through words...

"Well, my grandad started this company in 1986 and..."

"Ah so we have this proprietary solution that does..."

"Um, we actually do a lot of things..."

By this point the other person has lost interest.

A one-liner is a powerful statement you can use to help people understand why they need your product or service. It's your secret weapon to connect with anyone, anywhere.

If you confuse, you'll lose

The human brain is wired to filter all incoming information on survive and thrive basis.

Whether it’s reading and email or picking up the phone, we subconsciously prioritise information that meets a need (survive) or solves a problem (thrive).

With thousands of bits of information hitting us daily, our brains filter noise like clockwork. Therefore, to cut through the noise and create attention, we need to use the right words and quickly.

The magic of a one-liner is based on age-old storytelling principles…

 It all starts with story

Storytelling is the biggest industry on earth

Stories are powerful. It’s why Disney collected $70 billion in revenue last year.

We relate to stories because it’s easy for our brain to structure information as a story sequence. Without even knowing, we’re framing and narrating our own lives within a story.

Every good story has a start, middle and an end. We see this play out in movies, where the hero overcomes an enemy to reach victory.

We connect with heroes because we see ourselves in their story. Think about Star Wars. We can’t relate to intergalactic battles, but we can relate to the fear of inadequacy Luke Skywalker faces on his journey to becoming a Jedi Knight.

Remember, in marketing, your customer is the hero, not you.

You are are guide (Yoda).

One-Liners are used in screenplay pitches, because they encapsulate the key parts to a story a way that the can easily be understood and remembered.

To a screenwriter, the difference between a good and bad pitch can be worth millions. The same stakes apply to your business. 

The Bourne Supremacy:

“When Jason Bourne is framed for a CIA operation gone awry, he is forced to resume his former life as a trained assassin to survive.”

The one-liner formula

There are three ingredients to a one-liner:

  1. Problem

  2. Solution

  3. Outcome

“When Jason Bourne is framed for a CIA operation gone awry…”
= The Problem

“…he is forced to resume his former life as a trained assassin to…”
= The Solution

“…survive.” = The Outcome

 

 1. The problem

What is the primary pain point you solve for your customers?

A story starts when conflict is defined. In marketing, conflict is your customers pain point. The hero (customer) of the story then seeks a guide (your brand) to help overcome the conflict and achieve a desired outcome.

This is why most sales pitches fail. They start talking about how great the product or service is, missing out inviting the customer into a story by introducing a problem.

The bigger your pain point, the higher the engagement will be. Starting with a problem is the hook to open a story loop in your customers mind. You’ve now connected with them over a similar pain point…

Next, it’s time to position yourself as the guide.

 2. The solution

What product or service do you offer to solve the problem?

Now that you’ve introduced the problem, the customer can begin to relate. If not personally, they will likely know someone else who shares that similar problem.

Introduce your solution to resolve the problem. Use easy and clear words, avoiding jargon.

Your solution must be clear and unique. For example, if you were a financial advisor your solution might be “online finance coaching for couples”. What is it? Financial coaching. Who for? Couples. What’s unique? It’s online. Simple!

Give people and path and they will follow it…

 3. The solution

What result will your customer experience if they engage your product or service?

By positioning your brand as the guide to help solve their problem, you can now finish with painting what the end result will be. What will success look like when the hero has overcome the problem?

Remember, people don’t simply buy products. They buy the transformational identity of what they envision that product or service to deliver.

Be clear and specific. Show them exactly what success will look like when they engage your product or service.

Example one-liners

A pet store…

Pet owners are concerned about what their pets are eating. We source our food from organic, trusted vendors, so that your pet lives a long and healthy life.

 

An electronic bike…

With 110 people moving to Brisbane each week, people are wasting more time in traffic. With a Smart e-Bike you’ll get to work faster and add hours back to your day.

 

A bill comparison app…

Most people find their utility bills confusing. Our app that makes it easy to compare utility services, so you can make the right choice and save money year-round.  

Craft your one-liner

Download our free worksheet to craft your one-liner on paper. Need feedback? Send it to hello @leaderguide.com.au

 
 

Need more help?

Watch Donald Millar explain the one-liner live, courtesy of our friends at Entreleadership.